Slash is a badass!
__The Good__
Excellent style. I loved the whole story thing going on. The sotry was awesome, courageous, and funny! I really got into it. Nice music as well. It fit very well for this flash! I alos liked the lengh to the story. It was great!
__The Bad__
Just one picture? You guys could do better then that! I would have loved to seen some more pictures during the story. It would have made the flash so much better. Also the single animation you drew was pretty poor. I would have liked to see some action pictures. A narrator who would read the story for me would have been great also.
__Over All__
Over all this is a great story. Sadly it isn't much of a flash though. Next time if you make a story like this make sure it has a lot more bloody pictures! It would be hard making a story as good as this one, it was funny and compelling! Good job writing this story guys, keep it up! I'm looking forward to seeing a lot more flashes from you guys!