Hemlok's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dailytoon #239]

It was alright.

__The Good__
Excellent opening scene and menu screen. They were awesome! The graphics were pretty good. Especially mademoiselle's toon. That one was the best. Definately a nice style to these dailytoons. The music was good when you used it!

__The Bad__
Three of the four toons were pretty bad. You should really put more time and effort into your toons. Also I wish there was some music on the menu screen, it would look better. Some voice acting would have been nice too. I would have also liked tos ee some more humor. There really wasn't a lot of it.

__Over All__
Over all this isn't a very good Dailytoon. Mademoiselle's toon was the only good one. Still you have a nice menu screen and good music. Pretty good job making this Dailytoon, keep it up. Next time just put a little more effort into your tunes! Good luck on your future flashes!

[Kids - preview]

Looks great!

__The Good__
I'm sure Kids the series will be awesome! The graphics were great. They were very unique. Nice song, it fit very well into this preview. This is probably the best preview I have seen on Newgrounds so far. It was long, but you didn't give to much information.

__The Bad__
I didn't like all of those flashing lights going on. One is alright but too many of those flashing lights Isn't acceptable. I also wish you put more funny scenes in the preview. I didn't laugh as much as I wanted to. Also violent scenes would have been cool too!

__Over All__
Over all this is a really good preview! It's long and didn't give a lot of information, had a ice song and good graphics. If you just chose your scenes more wisely for the preview it would have been better. Great job making this preview, keep up the good work! I can't wait to see the Kid series!

[The 5th floor]

Good horror scenes.

__The Good__
As far as backgrounds go, they were decent. Very nice style to this flash. Newgrounds could use more horror flashes like this. The music was nice, it fit very well with this flash. The best part of this flash was the horror scenes. If the graphics were really good, my heart migh thave been raceing!

__The Bad__
As far as characters go, they were poorly drawn. If you want people to take this flash more seriously then you need to improve on your graphics. No audio? I know not a lot of voice acting could be used in here but it would have been nice to hear that pizza man scream before he got his head chopped off!

__Over All__
Over all this is a below average horror flash. The graphics weren't very good and it was very short but they were pretty good horror scenes. The music fit well also. If you just Improve on the graphics and the length this flash would be so much better! You did a pretty good job on this flash, keep it up! Good luck on your future flashes!

[Slash Returns]

Slash is a badass!

__The Good__
Excellent style. I loved the whole story thing going on. The sotry was awesome, courageous, and funny! I really got into it. Nice music as well. It fit very well for this flash! I alos liked the lengh to the story. It was great!

__The Bad__
Just one picture? You guys could do better then that! I would have loved to seen some more pictures during the story. It would have made the flash so much better. Also the single animation you drew was pretty poor. I would have liked to see some action pictures. A narrator who would read the story for me would have been great also.

__Over All__
Over all this is a great story. Sadly it isn't much of a flash though. Next time if you make a story like this make sure it has a lot more bloody pictures! It would be hard making a story as good as this one, it was funny and compelling! Good job writing this story guys, keep it up! I'm looking forward to seeing a lot more flashes from you guys!

SlashFirestorm responds:

lol, honestly, I am SHOCKED this passed. It was a hastily-thrown together piece of crap, made on the same morning I came back, to announce my return to those who know me. By some miracle, composed primarily of excellent music and my reputation, this thing passed! Haha.

Since it passed at even this pitifully basic level, I am thinking about perhaps re-making it, or using the format and enhancing it for other storylines. I promise that if I do, there will be such things as more pictures (and maybe even some animation, omg)...speech, maybe speakonia, maybe my "sexy" voice...yeah.

Thanks for the review! ^_^

[Day With magic boy]

Kinda funny.

__The Good__
I found this flash some what amuseing. When he was going to the bathroom was what made me giggle. Definately a nice style to this, I liked the whole interaction with the buttons and such. It was nice.

__The Bad__
The graphics were poor. They could have been a lot better. The voice acting was pretty bad as well. A little imitation of Cartmen isn't very funny. Plus it was low quality. The flash was way too short. It also didn't even have a point. It was all random (in a bad way) and didn't make any sense!

__Over All_
Over all this flash isn't very good. I was way too short and the graphics were very poor. I would like to see more button interactivity in your flashes though. Good try on makeing this flash, good luck on your future flashes!

[Pok]

Stupid.

__The Good__
I really liked the song! It was pretty catchy. I also liked your style, it's something different. I also liked how the pictures went with the song. Not many people can accomplish that but you did! Also a nice variety of pictures, they went with the song smoothly.

__The Bad__
You didn't have your own animation. This would have been so much better if it was your own animation. It was also pretty boring. Listening to a song with pictures of Sailor Moon singing it isn't very fun to be watching.

__Over All__
Over all this isn't a good flash. You used a nice song and had a unique style but you didn't use your own animation. Next time if you make a flash then you need to use your own animation! Good luck on your next flash movie!

[Cheers To Bonus Stage]

Nice idea.

__The Good__
This was a really nice idea. Exellent song, I've always loved the opening to Cheers! You used some nice pictures. It was also pretty funny!

__The Bad__
It was really short. This could have been a lot better if it was longer. I wish you used pictures that went with the song. You should have made it in color as well. It would look a lot better. It wasn' very creative because you didn't use your own animation. I know this is a tribute to the eries Bonus Stage but it still isn't very creative.

[TMTOMH: Chapter 1]

Made me laugh.

__The Good__
The music was good. I liked the song it was catchy! I'm not sure I like your style but it is different. I liked how your flash stayed with the song, that's pretty hard to do. Also it made me laugh for some reason.

__The Bad__
It was repetitive. It got boring fast. Also you didn't do any animating. Why would I give this a good score if you didn't do most of the work?

__Over All__
Over all this isn't very good. It's a nice song and the flash is somewhat funny. Sadly you did do any animating. If you just did your own animations then this flash would have been a lot better. Good luck on your future flashes!

[EW: The Evil Idiot]

What just happened?

__The Good__
The graphics were pretty good, I liked the backgrounds. Whatever style this was, it surely was different.

__The Bad__
The voice acting was terrible! I couldn't understand one word of it. The old lady was esier to listen to but was still hard to understand.The voices were also stupid and annoying. I couldn't even tell if there was a plot or just two people rambling abou something. It was way too short! You couldn't do a lot with this because it was so short! Also there was barely any violence. When the old lady was shot you could have at least added some blood!

__Improvement__
This flash needs a lot of improvement! Use better voices next time. The ones you are useing are just plain stupid. More violence next time and of course make it a lot longer!

__Over All__
Over all this flash isn't good. It's short and hard to understand. Try harder next time! Good luck on your future flashes!

[Lovestory_(dnt)]

Nice style!

__The Good__
This is a very nice flash! You had very nice animation, I thought the dragon was the best! Nice music, I thought it was really good for this flash. Nice text also. This flash had a decent length. Great style to this, one of the better creative flashes in my opinion. I loved how you had a happy ending extra. That was just great!

__The Bad__
Not a lot of color. This would have been better with more color. No audio either, I would have liked to hear some voice acting. The backgrounds seemed like they were poorly done. More violence next time! I would have liked to seen the black guy and the dragon duke it out.

__Improvement__
Make better backgrounds, it would look so much better. Try adding some voice acting and have more violence next time! This flash could have been longer as well.

__Over All__
Over all this is a very nice flash! It was very creative and had nice animation. Keep up the good work and I hope to see a lot more flashes from you in the future!