Hemlok's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vegeta's Tranformation]

Not good.

__The Good__
There wasn't really anything good about this flash. I liked the music, it brought back some memories of my Dragonball Z days. The subtitles were nice and clear as well.

__The Bad__
Sadly there was a lot of bad things in this flash. First of all this isn't really your idea. I vaguely remember seeing that episode were Vegeta transforms and you basically did the exact same thing. Also it was really short and there wasn't any voice acting. The graphics were very poor as well.

__Improvement__
A lot of things need improvement. You need to get your own ideas when you make flashes. Noeone wants to see something you copied. You also need to make it longer and definately add some voice acting. Take more time on your graphics next time.

__Over All__
Over all this isn't a good flash. It isn't your idea and it was really short. Next time try a lot harder. Good luck on your next flash!

[An Angel May Rise]

Way too short!

__The Good__
Nice graphics. Your animation is really great. I liked the rain, it was really well done! I liked the opening and ending scenes. They seemed professional. The music also fit very well with this flash movie.

__The Bad__
No voice acting? I guess there wasn't a lot of time for any voices but it would have been nice if you added them. Way too short! This could have been so much better if you had a story to this. It also seemed that this could have ended a lot faster. It's not like I wanted it to end sooner it was just that it seemed like it took a really long time for the Angel to catch up with the other girl.

__Improvement__
The only thing you need to improve on is the length and actually have a story to your next flash. Also make sure to add some voices to the characters.

__Over All__
Over all this a decent flash movie. You had nice graphics and good music. Sadly it was way too short and didn't have any voice acting. Good luck on your future flashes!

[Blood Brothers ep.1]

Excellent!

__The Good__
This is a really great flash. You had pretty good graphics and backgrounds. A great story line but it seems people use this a lot. Great music as well. It fit perfectly into this flash! This flash probably has the best voice acting I have heard on Newgrounds in a very long time.

__The Bad__
The mouth movement was way off. Now I don't know if this is just my computer but this was really laggy when I looked at it. The audio kept going on but the movie just stayed in one frame for the longest time. Sorry if this is just my computer's fault but I needed to point that out.

__Improvement__
You should fix the mouth movement. I don't know why but I just can't take this flash as seriously as I want to with the mouths are all off key. You might want to shapen up your graphics as well. They were good but at some points the characters just didn;t look right.

__Over All__
Over all this is a really good flash. I really enjoyed watching it. Had a fast pace to it and the voice acting really blew me away. Great job makeing this flash, I can't wait to see the next one! Just shapen up those graphics a bit. Once again good job on makeing this. Keep up the good work!

[Everything Mushrooms!]

Not a flash.

If you want to submit a flash onto Newgrounds next time do some work! This is not a flash. It's a collage of pictures, mostly mushrooms. At least you put some music into it. Sadly it didn't even fit this flash. Anything could have made this flash better. You should have drawn your own pictures and that would have made this better, not much but it would help. I'm sorry but I couldn't even finish watching this flash! Over all this flash movie sucks, it's not even a flash! Everything needs improveing. Next time you make a flash try putting a little effort into it instead of just throwing some pictures together. Also have a point next time! I'm not usually this critical about flashes but nuthing was good about this.

[Actually it's called]

That's it?

I was expecting a great episode of this fine series but it was just an opening. Man how depressing! Great graphics. I thought the characters could have used some more detail but the backgrounds and objects were awesome! Not that the characters didn't look great either. You got a nice style to this flash. It just looks like an average group of friends and they do some cool stuff! That guy at the beginning of this flash had a good voice. Fit him very well! The song was cool too. The beginning was great. That opening sketch really made me laugh! I hope this was just a trailer for an awesome series! Over all this is a good flash but just way too short. I'm sure if you actually made an episode it would be a big hit. The only things that need to be improved the violence and definately the length of this flash. I hope there will be some drunk fist fights in the future! I also hope the next time will be at least ten minutes long! Good job makeing this short flash. Keep up the good work.

HAM-Mosessess responds:

you make me cry, so hard. rock hard.

alas, the show is cancelled, but is being redesigned with more appropriate jokes and animation. much more lively, I hope you'll see then. thanks for the long ass review

[LL - LD Trailer 2]

Nice trailer.

Good work on this trailer guys. You really worked hard on this. The graphics were awesome! The backgrounds and the characters were great and very detailed. You also have anice style to this. I just realised something. This is the first Lock Legion move I have seen without useing subtitles! I just found that pretty odd. The voices were great. They fit well in this flash. Also the sound effects were pretty good. Although there was violence in this flash there sure wasn't a lot of it. I wish you had more fighting scenes in this trailer. I gave you a six for humor because of that emo scene with the Simple Plan song. That was just classic! Over all this is a really good trailer! Everything was great! The only thing that could use improveing is more violent scenes! I know this is only a trailer but you didn't show a lot in it. Anyway good job makeing this trailer. Keep up the good work guys!

[Behind the Magic]

Hilarious!

This is what I call a clock movie! Everything was perfect! I almost fell off my chair laughing so hard! A clock flash doesn't get much better then this. The graphics were great. Nice backgrounds and nice character drawings. Perfect style to this. Never in my life have I seen a clock movie like this. It was a nice change of pace! Exellent voices. Starting from the narrator to the main characters! I wish there was some violence in this flash though. Would have been a nice touch. This flash was just flat out hilarious! The speed of Strawberry Clock and Orange Clock's conversation was perfect. That's wad made this funny. I honestly don't think it could be any funnier. The Star Syndicate comment was great! Over all this is a great clock movie, probably one of the best I've seen. The only thing that could be improved is some violence and make your next one longer! Great job makeing this flash. Keep up the good work!

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Thanks a bunch for the wave of suggestions. Violence would've been the icing on the cake, i guess. As for a "next time", i'm thinking about making something, but no promises as of yet.

[Mugger]

Not good.

Come on dude you could have done a lot better then this. The only good thing were the clay figures. They were pretty decent. Other then that nuthing else was good. You didn;t have any audio. Couldn't you have at least put some music in it? Voice acting would have been really nice but you just had sub titles. The sub titles were hard to read! I guess when he the blue guy shot the pink guys brains out with that poorly made gun was pretty cool. When he took the money from him it looked like he was humping the guy! When the blue guy ran away why didn't he take his gun? He just left it there on the crime scene. Overall this is a pretty crappy claymation. A lot of things need improvement such as The audio, more violence, and make your next one a lot longer. Please try a lot harder on your next flash.